Sharing some partial of my living ^^
1. What do you do if your supervisor did not reply your email?
The third term i just have the final dissertation need to finish and the topic is consumer behaviour on local food. Actually, i have no idea about this topic and i sent email to my supervisor in last two weeks. However, he did not reply me. May be he is too busy or may be he forget that thing. I want to direct go to his office on next Monday and tell him what am i thinking.
2. Small things happened in today
I went to city centre to take part-time job in a Chinese buffet. I am so happy the staff in this restaurant are so nice. Now i am siting in Costa and chatting with my collegaues Cyn and Henry. They are so nice. Cyn is my classmate and she is a outstanding girl. Her english is very good because she have stayed in UK four years. Henry is a Vietnam boy. He is so cute and easy-going.
Thanks^^
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Sharing a part of my everyday life ^^ --> is and sounds more fluent/native to read this way ;)
It is the third term and I really have to finish the final dissertation, the topic is consumer behaviour on local food. Actually, I have no idea about this topic and I sent an email to my supervisor two weeks ago. However, he did not reply to me, maybe he is too busy or just forgot about it. I want to go directly into his office next Monday and tell him how I feel about it.
2. Some small things happened today
I went to city centre to take a part-time job in a Chinese buffet. I am so happy because the staff in the restaurant is so nice. Now i am siting in Costa and chatting with my colleagues Cyn and Henry. They are so nice, Cyn is my classmate and she is an outstanding girl and her English is very good because she stayed in the UK for four years. Henry is a Vietnamese boy, he is so cute and easy-going.
Thanks^^
In English we often use a comma or the word "and" to continue thoughts and sentences to make it sound more fluently but this just as a tip for you ;), otherwise your English is very good!
And I would suggest got into the office of your supervisor and just kindly ask him if has time to help you out with your dissertation topic because you don't have much knowledge about it and you would be very happy if he can help you! This way the conversation will be in a positive way :D and I think he will gladly support you!
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