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My travelling experience with italki friends in Beijing Part Two
I would really appreciate it if you could review my essay.
How time flied! flies.
It's my pleasure to spend the past few days with you in Beijing exploring the city together, which for me is also a brand-new experience.
I very much enjoyed the experience of spending the past few days with you exploring Beijing. It was also my first visit to the city. ('It was my pleasure' is not wrong but is not used very often nowadays. I notice Chinese speakers use this expression very often, probably as a form of politeness, but it sounds quite unusual to native speakers of English).
The people — I really enjoy talking to so many interesting people in the journey and everyone has had their own unique stories that I will always remember. I strongly believe that people are not that different just because we are from different countries which proves self-evident was clear after this journey.
The Culture — As a Chinese, there are still many things in our culture I haven't fully understood or appreciated yet. It's with other people's perspective on traditional culture that I am able to get to know and even love it in the end. Thank you for allowing me to view Chinese culture from a new way. perspective.
The experience —After four days of journey the four day trip, I keep thinking about what is left in my mind. Amongst all the things, I figure figured out that experience accumulated is the most valuable thing. What could have been better than a cross-culture conversation between young generations from different countries? Now I am proud to tell people that I know what Americans are like based on my experience but not how the media describes them about in China.
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