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Studying online could you correct it,please ? Also, what I need to improve my writing skills. thanks a lot ! Studying whether is online or in class is very important because everyone has to learn to have a knowledge, science to be respected by people because without learning, we’re nothing, so we have to study as long as we live. Recently, we have witnessed that studying online has spread out these days. There are reasons encourage people to study online. First, you can study anything you want counter to studying in a class that forces you to study a specific thing. Second, you decide a place to study in whether is indoor or outdoor, so you can study wherever you are. For instance, in a park, cafe, etc. But when you study in a class you get bored fast and doze during the class. Third, as a student you face financial problems, but studying online helps you to save money. For example, to study in a class, you use transportation, and that costs you a lot, but when you study online you don’t need to take a bus to go to class. Forth, you can learn whenever you want, so you are not forced to study in a specific time, so if you have a lesson, and got sick or any excuse else, you can postpone your lesson whenever you are free. We have mentioned many advantages for studying online, also studying online has disadvantages. At the forefront of these disadvantages is missing atmosphere of class. When you study online, you might have a tutor or you just watch recorded videos, but you don’t have class full of students and a teacher to have a discussion with. Because this atmosphere helps you to study hard counter to studying online you might lazes to study because you have no one to encourage you. Also, according to availability to delay lessons at studying online, you don’t perform well as much as in class. Finally, studying online or in class has an advantages and disadvantages, so everyone chooses the way that he want to study by that makes him comfortable.

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Studying online

Could you correct it, please? Also, what I need to improve my writing skills. Thanks a lot !

Studying whether it is online or in class is very important because everyone has to learn to gain a knowledge, and to be respected by people because without learning, we’re nothing, so we have to study as long as we live.

Recently, we have witnessed that studying online has spread out these days. There are reasons which encourage people to study online. First, you can study anything you want to counter studying in a class that forces you to study a specific thing. Second, you decide on a place to study in whether it is indoors or outdoors, so you can study wherever you are. For instance, in a park, cafe, etc.  However, when you study in a class, you can get bored fast and doze off during the class. Third, as a student you face financial problems, but studying online helps you to save money. For example, to study in a class, you use transportation, and that costs you a lot, but when you study online you don’t need to take a bus to go to class. Forth, you can learn whenever you want, so you are not forced to study in a specific time, so if you have a lesson, and got sick or have any other excuse, you can postpone your lesson until whenever you are free.

We have mentioned many advantages for studying online, also studying online has disadvantages. At the forefront of these disadvantages, it is missing the atmosphere of a class. When you study online, you might have a tutor or you just watch recorded videos, but you don’t have a class full of students and a teacher to have a discussion with. This atmosphere helps you to study hard counter to studying online but you might lazes around instead of  to studying because you have no one to encourage you. Also, according to availability to delay lessons at studying online, you don’t perform well as much as in class.

Finally, studying online or in class has an advantages and disadvantages, so everyone chooses the way that he they want to study by that making themselves comfortable.

We never start a sentence with 'but' or 'because'. Overall, a good effort. Keep up the good work! 

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