My Introduction
Hi, my name is Madoka. I live in Japan with my husband. I am 29 years old.
I am learning English. I want to make friends and teach languages each other.
My hobby is playing the bass and watching animation and cultivation of plants.
My favorite artists are Red Hot Chili Peppers, Radiohead, Oasis and so on.
Please feel free to contact me anytime.
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My Introduction
Hi, my name is Madoka. I live in Japan with my husband. I am 29 years old.I am learning English. I want to make friends and teach languages each to others. {or "...exchange languages with others"?}
My hobbies are playing (the) bass,* and watching animation and cultivation of cultivating plants. {or "gardening"}**
My favorite artists are Red Hot Chili Peppers, Radiohead, Oasis and so on etc.*** {or "among others"}
Please feel free to contact me anytime.
*The "the" can be omitted here. Usually, we just say "I play bass" or "I play guitar", but we do say "I play the piano" or "I play the drums".
**Since the other hobbies have an "...ing" form, it flowsbetter to have them all follow the same form.
***The phrase "so on" suggests that the others in the series are evident/obvious, and they're really not in this case because there isn't anything obviously in common with those bands, i.e. the next in the series could be anything from James to the Wallflowers to Nirvana, Soundgarden, FSOL, etc.
Ex: Prime numbers are 1, 3, 5, 7 and so on. {it follows that the next one is 11, 13, etc.}
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My Introduction
Hi, my name is Madoka. I live in Japan with my husband. I am 29 years old.I am learning English. I want to make friends and teach languages to others.
My hobbies are playing the bass and watching animation and cultivation of plants.
My favorite artists are Red Hot Chili Peppers, Radiohead, Oasis and so on.
Please feel free to contact me anytime.
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