A cold day
Today, I wake up early in the morning. I made my breakfast a delicius plate of fried eggs and a cup of coffe. I thought wear my new shirt but At opened the window I note that the day was cloudy, So that I wore my old coat. Sometimes I hate the winter, especially in days like this.
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A Cold Day (use capital letters in the title)
Today I woke up early in the morning. I made my breakfast, a delicius plate of fried eggs, and a cup of coffe. I thought about wearing my new shirt.Well done!
Hate is a very strong word. I would not use it to describe my feelings about the weather.
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A cold day
Today, I woke up early in the morning. I made my breakfast: a delicious plate of fried eggs and a cup of coffee. I thought to wear my new shirt but when I opened the window I noted that the day was cloudy, So I wore my old coat. Sometimes I hate the winter, especially on days like this.Not bad, I understood what you were saying. Just be sure to use the same tense through out: you used present and past tense.
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