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Childhood and adulthood Have you ever asked someone about what he likes more childhood or adulthood? The answer was childhood, wasn’t it? Childhood is an amazing period in our life, because we were angle and pour. We were laughing every time, because we had no worries about everything. We were crying as well, but the reasons was absurdity. For instance, we cry if someone takes our dolls or someone ate our cake. We also didn’t spend lots of time thinking about our future, but we hoped to get older quickly. Then, when this dream came true, we hoped to go back again to live our childhood forever. Adulthood is a wonderful period. It is awful as well. In this stage, we become something else. We have lots of worries and troubles, so we always cry. We also laugh, but not from inside of us. The life gets difficult every day and we try to find a solution for each problem we have, but when we solve it, another problem hits us. We have to work to get money, because we’re not children anymore, so we have responsibility to do. Actually, we can’t get some rest to charge our batteries to continue what we do, so when it gets dark, we sleep to escape from this world. Everyone has to pass this stage and don’t give up, because we don’t live here forever, so we can take it easy and do our best, because we will be asked by our god about everything we did. The god created us for a destination and the life is a test we have to pass it to live a good life in the afterlife.

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Childhood and adulthood

Have you ever asked someone about what he likes more childhood or adulthood? The answer was childhood, wasn’t it?

Childhood is an amazing period in our life because we were like angels and pure. We were laughing every time because we had no worries about everything. We were crying as well, but the reasons were silly . For instance, we were crying  if someone took our dolls or someone ate our cake. We also didn’t spend lots of time thinking about our future, but we hoped to become older quickly. Then, when this dream came true, we hoped to go back again to live our childhood forever.

Adulthood is a wonderful period. It is awful as well. In this stage, we become something else. We have lots of worries and troubles, so we always cry. We also laugh, but not from inside of us. The life gets more difficult every day ,and we try to find a solution for each problem we have, but when we solve it, another problem hits us. We have to work to get money  because we’re not children anymore, so we have  a responsibility to do. Actually, we can’t get some rest to charge our batteries to continue what we do, so when it gets dark, we sleep to escape from this world.

Finally,everyone has to pass this stage and don’t give up, because we don’t live here forever, so we can take it easy and do our best, because we will be asked by our god about everything we did. God created us for a destination and the life is a test we have to pass it to live a good life in the afterlife.



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