The relationship between doctors and patiens in China

The relationship between doctors and patienTs in China is sensitive(.) Maybe the key question is THAT they don’t trust each other. We don’t have the right to make the judgement ABOUT who is right or wrong(,) but we have to confess when patients come to THE hospital, they think THEY should be healed, or that IT IS the doctors’ dereliction of duty. This leads to the next topic of death(.) When we mentioned death(,) the first word THAT comeS to our mind is FAIRNESS(.) There is a proverb(:) A living dog is better than a dead lion. Actually(,) I don’t agree with it(.) When I saw patients who WERE unconscious AND laid on the sickbed with many tubeS insertED inTO their body, it WAS miserable(,) but they didn’t have the right to choose To live or die, because the right belongED to their kids OR even TO THE doctors. I think the quality of life is the most important thing.

The one sentence with a lot of corrections was just to make all of the verbs match in past-tense. This was very well written. We use more, shorter sentences.