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Spanish general election Have you ever doubt about our politicians’ negligence? In my case the answer is: No, I haven’t. However I can’t keep clear of such a disappointing feeling inside me. After last elections, right and left, conservative and progressive wings, were trying to reach an agreement in order to rule the country. Well, this is what they actually were supposed to do but instead of work for the future of the country, they spent time with ineffective meetings as well as they were discrediting one each other in the media the whole time. It’s shameful. What citizens have vote? Plurality! Why on earth can’t they manage to reflect it on congress? From my point of view it’s only because they are only trying to reach to their piece of cake. They don’t care about nation, they only care about their party. As a result, a country overexploit by rich thief and debts is due to undergo new legislative elections, involving more public expense. Reflecting on this, one question came to my mind. How do you, other World people, think about Spanish? It’s difficult to self-evaluate me objectively, but I feel that there’s a hole between what is seem through our leaders (their huge ineptitude, their stupid rules and agreements), and real Spanish people. Please, don’t put all us in the same sack! Polls claim that over 80% of people are highly likely not to change their vote, so: What will happen next June? We’ll probably continue dancing in their hands… or not. We’ll see!

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Spanish general election

Have you ever any doubts about our politicians’ negligence? In my case the answer is no, I haven’t. However I can’t keep clear of such from having a disappointing feeling of disappointment inside me.

After the last elections, right and left, conservative and progressive wings, were trying to reach an agreement in order to rule govern the country. Well, that is what they actually were supposed to do but instead of working for the future of the country, they spent time with ineffective meetings as well as while they were discrediting (better: denouncing) one each other in the media the whole time. It’s shameful.

What citizens have vote? (not sure what you mean) Plurality! Why on earth can’t they manage to reflect it on in congress? From my point of view it’s only because they are only trying to reach to for their piece of cake. They don’t care about the nation, they only care about their party. As a result, a country already overexploited by rich thieves and debts is due to will undergo new legislative elections, involving more public expense.

Reflecting on this, one question came to my mind. How What do you, other World people of the world, think about the Spanish? It’s difficult for me to self-evaluate me objectively, but I feel that there’s a hole gap between what is seen through from our leaders (their huge ineptitude, their stupid rules and agreements), and the real Spanish people. Please, don’t put all us in the same sack lump us all together!

Polls claim that over 80% of people are highly unlikely not to change their vote, so what will happen next June? We’ll probably continue dancing in their hands (not sure what you mean)… or not. We’ll see!

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Spanish general election

Have you ever had doubts about our politicians’ negligence? In my case the answer is: No, I haven’t. However I can’t keep clear myself of such a disappointing feeling inside me.

After the last elections, right and left, conservative and progressive wings, were trying to reach an agreement in order to rule run (or govern) the country. Well, this is what they actually were supposed to do but instead of working for the future of the country, they spent time with ineffective meetings as well as they were  discrediting (or while they were discrediting) one each other (or one another) in the media the whole time. It’s shameful.

What citizens have vote What have the citizens voted for(?? I'm not sure if this is what you mean)? Plurality! Why on earth can’t they manage to reflect it on in congress? From my point of view it’s only because they are only trying to reach to for their piece of cake. They don’t care about the nation, they only care about their party. As a result, a country overexploited by rich thieves and debts is due to undergo new legislative elections, involving more public expense.

Reflecting on this, one question came to my mind. How What do you, other World people of the world, think about the Spanish? It’s difficult for me to self-evaluate me objectively, but I feel that there’s a hole (better: gap) between what is seen through our leaders (their huge ineptitude, their stupid rules and agreements), and real Spanish people. Please, don’t put all us in the same sack boat!

Polls claim that over 80% of people are highly likely not to change their vote, so: What will happen next in June? We’ll probably continue dancing in their hands (doing the hand dance??)… or not. We’ll see!

 

Interesting stuff, and well written. My corrections are in red and my suggestions to sound more natural are in blue/grey.


What do you think about Spanish = Spanish language

What do you think about the Spanish = Spanish people


"Next June" implies June 2017.

"This June" or "In June" implies June of this year.

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