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raising pets are consuming Many people buy imported food for pets and they believe that imported pet food is healthier and has rich nutrients than domestic food. Taking a real example, my neighbor, Lily, raises a dog as pet. She cares the dog very much, and she only buys imported food for the dog, which costs five times money than domestic food does. It is no doubt that she puts too much attention on her pets that the spending of raising the pet accounts for nighty percentage of her income. She even could not afford her basic expenses like meals and transportation charges. However, She is not the only one encountering this problem. Many of my friends who raise animals are in the similar trouble. In this sense, it’s obvious that people consume a large amount of money on pets, which already has a bad influence on living.

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Raising pets is time-consuming

Many people buy imported food for pets because they believe that imported pet food is healthier and has richer in nutrients than domestic food. Taking a real For example, my neighbor, Lily, raises a dog as pet. She cares for the dog very much, and she only buys imported food for the dog, which costs five times more money than domestic food does. It is no doubt that she gives too much attention to her pets. that the spending of raising the pet How much she spends on her pet accounts for ninety percentage of her income. She cannot even afford her basic expenses, like meals and transportation charges. However, she is not the only one encountering this problem. Many of my friends who raise animals are in the similar trouble.* In this sense, it’s obvious that people spend a large amount of money on pets, which already has a bad influence on living.

Very good!

*I have one comment: we do not typically say raising pets. We just say "have a pet." So while your sentence is correct, it would be more natural to say "Many of my friends who have pets (or animals)...". We only say raising when we're talking about someone who breeds animals or trains baby animals.

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