Please correct me, If you have any time. I really appreciate it!

Please correct me if you have the time. I will really appreciate it!

Please check these sentences.

1) Our training was postponed untill/to tomorrow by our coach. ok

2)My father always denounces social networks/social networking.>social networks are just structures. Social networking is the use of these structures .
2) My father had always denounced social networking when asked for an opinion.

2)My father always treat social networking with scorn. ( denounce is to publicly declare something as bad)
3) The goal (scored)by Ramos rescued Real Madrid from defeat.
4) The government safeguards/protects/preserves our national resources.
5) I have a unique car collection.
6) Both teams consented to postponing the match untill/to Monday.
7) I want to have massive muscles.
8) Why are you so gloomy today? ok
9) Tommy resented from me , after my terrible joke.
10) I Personally, I adhor/denounces the molestation of women. Adhor = Regard with disgust and hatred.
11) A dreadful torrent of flood water destroyed all the houses in the village.

Please correct me, If you have any time. I really appreciate it!

Well done! You only had a few mistakes. I will give you some of them, but some of the other explanations are long so if you want to know everything, feel free to contact me to discuss them!

1) You had a couple spelling mistakes "until" and "tomorrow"
2) You can say it the way you wrote it, but it sounds odd to native speakers. In English, the most common way to show possession is to add an apostrophe (') at the end of the noun with possession. The noun goes before the object being possessed. Nouns that end in most consonants and vowels receive an ('s) at the end as in, "My mom's hat is grey" or "Amanda's car is nice." If you have a noun that ends in an "s", you only add an apostrophe and it goes after the "s". For example, " James' house was just built last year."
5) "An" should be "a", although "unique" starts with a vowel, the rule doesn't count for every word. It's better to go with the beginning sound. If the sound is a consonant, use "a". If the sound is a vowel, use "an". Another example of an exception to this rule is the word "hour". It begins with the letter "h", but the beginning sound is a vowel sound so we say "an hour" instead of "a hour".