My dad
Today is a happy day because today is my dad's birthday.I am very happy and I very love my dad.My father is a very good man .He works in a factory, work very hard every day.My father is very busy he seldom has free time to stay at home.my dad very love me so that every evening he came home to my room to see me for a while.I want to say to my dad happy birthday to my father. I wish my father healthy work smoothly。I love you very much dad!
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My dad
Today is a happy day because today is my dad's birthday. I am very happy and I very love my dad .My father is a very good man .He works in a factory, works very hard every day. My father is very busy he seldom has free time to stay at home. His love for me is so much that every evening, after being back home, he comes to my room to see me for a while. I want to say to my dad happy birthday to my father. I wish my father healthy and smooth in work smoothly。I love you very much dad!1
My dad
Today is a happy day because today/it's is my dad's birthday.I am very happy and I very love my dad very much.My father is a very/truly good man .He works in a factory . He works very hard every day.My father is very busy . He seldom has a free time to stay at home.My dad very love me so much , so that every evening he comes home to my room to/in order to see me for a while.I want to say to my dad:"Happy birthday my father.". I wish my father healthy work smoothly。I love you very much dad!*The words which are bold :it's better to say them or to use synomones instead of repeating the word a lot .
*Your father is so wonderful .God bless him .
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