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Investments in Worker's Technlogy - I need a correction please. Advances technologies in work office have increased the worker's production, because workers are more quickly in their work and they can spend more time in front of the desk. For example, the photocopy machines save worker's time in making copies and documents; the introduction of the email making the comunications more fast, convenient and cheap, and they eliminate the frequent worker's meetings. All this making these types of investiments a big pay back for business choices. Instead, the technologies in work office causing also a bad effects for physical problems in workers and it can reduces their productivity. In fact, spending all the day in front of the computer, causing pain to the eyes, the back and the neck. For trying to resolve these bad effects and incresing productivity and health, it has been suggested to have a break where the workers getting up and walking around for five minutes every hour, to have a meal out the office and to use ergonomic chairs and keyboards in their desk places.

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Investments in Workers' Technlogy - I need a correction please.

(Advances technologies in work office) TECHNOLOGICAL ADVANCES IN THE WORKPLACE have increased the workers' production, because workers (are more quickly in their work) FINISH THEIR WORK MORE QUICKLY and can spend more time in front of theIR deskS. For example, the photocopy machines save workers' time in making copies and documents(.) The introduction of email HAS MADE comunication (more fast) FASTER, MORE convenient and cheapER, and IT eliminate the frequenCY OF workers' meetings.  THESE TYPES OF INVESTMENT CHOICES GIVE BUSINESSES A BIG PAYBACK.
Instead, SOME technologies in THE workPLACE causE physical problems in workers and can reduce their productivity. In fact, spending all day in front of a computer CAN causE pain IN the eyes, the back and the neck. TO TRY to resolve these bad (ILL) effects and increase productivity and health, it has been suggested THAT WORKERS SHOULD have a break where they get up and walk around for five minutes every hour, have a meal outSIDE the office and use ergonomic chairs and keyboards AT their deskS.


possessive of a plural = workers' time, i.e. 'the time of all of the workers'

possessive of one worker = worker's time, i.e. the time of one worker

Use more infinitive instead of gerund (-ing) when the subject is not alive 'Some technologies.... ' or your discussion is opinion, and not the description of an ongoing action.

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