My mother
My mother went to pay the phone bill today but she encountered a problem .she did not make a telephone call in yesterday it 5yuan of money.what is the matter ?my mother did not know .she went to ask customer service .The customer service tell me mother since September 2014 has opened some business,so the cost . the compensation of the service for my mother some momey .so ,it was over.I hold the view that customer sevice is supposed totake effective measures to deal with the problem.in a word ,in a sense ,my mother be suppsed to enhanced and cultivate the awareness of activist.
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My Mother
My mother went to pay the phone bill today but she encountered a problem. She did not make a telephone call in yesterday which cost 5 yuan. What is the matter? My mother did not know. She went to ask customer service .The customer service representative told my mother since September 2014 she had opened some business. The cost was for this type of of the service..So the conversation was over. I hold (have) the opinion that customer service is supposed to take effective measures to deal with a problem. In a word, my mother needs to cultivate the awareness of activist and fight back.******I hope my corrections reflect your thoughts. At the end of the story I was a little confused. (I think your mother did NOT solve the problem with the telephone company and that she was charged money as if it was a business account?)
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My mother
My mother went to pay the phone bill today but she encountered a problem. She did not make a telephone call in yesterday it that cost 5 yuan of money. What is the matter? My mother did not know. She went to ask customer service.The customer service employee told tell me my mother since that in September 2014 it has opened some a new business,so hence the cost. The compensation of the service for my mother was some money .So ,it was over.I hold the view that customer service is supposed to take effective measures to deal with the problem. In a word ,in a sense ,my mother is supposed to enhanced and cultivate the awareness of activist.*It's a little confusing to read at times, so I hope my corrections stay true to what you were trying to say. It makes it easier to read writing in English if you capitalize the first letter of each sentence and place a period right at the end of each sentence.
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