The increase in temperature - I need a correction please.
The human's activities have increased the earth's temperature in the last two centuries.
This is starting during the first industrial revolution, when the humans being started to pulluted the environment with coal and gas, which had started the greenhouse gases process.
Today the greenhouse gases have increased the temperature until 1,5 grades Fahrenheit: this is a negative effects for the environment like the water scarcity and the extinction numerous plants and animals.
In the last years the USA's weather stations have recorded the increase of the temperature in the North – East of the country, which is increased serial degrees Fahrenheit.
The greatest negative effects about the temperature change are in winter season (to December until March) in the rural area of North - East, because it damages one big sector of the economy: the skiing tourism, especially sky centers, hotels, restaurants and gift shops.
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The increase in temperature - I need a correction please.
Human's activities have increased the earth's temperature in the last two centuries.This started during the first industrial revolution, when human beings started to polluted the environment with coal and gas, which started the production of greenhouse gases.
Today greenhouse gases have increased the temperature by 1.5 grades Fahrenheit; this has negative effects for the environment like increased water scarcity and the extinction of numerous plants and animals.
In the last few years the USA's weather stations have recorded the increase of the temperature in the North East of the country, which has increased several degrees Fahrenheit.
The greatest negative effects due to temperature changes are in the winter season ( from December until March) in the rural areas of the North East, because it damages one big sector of the economy, skiing tourism, especially ski centers, hotels, restaurants and gift shops.
The use of the hyphen in North East, it does not do anything, so don't use it. Generally there is a lot of confusion about the "-" it is seldom used by educated people. It is required for two things, 1) to ensure there is certainty about the meaning or 2) to allow words to be broken for printing putting half the word on the next line. There is no confusion about "North East of the country" so no hyphen.
BTW, I suspect global warming has hurt the economy of the poor in the USA far more than it has hurt the ski bunnies :-)
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The Iincrease in Ttemperature - I need a correction please.
Mankind's The human's activities have increased the earth's temperature in the last two centuries.This started is starting during the first Iindustrial Rrevolution, when the humans beings started to pollutepulluted the environment with coal and gas,. This which had started the Ggreenhouse effect gases process.
Today the greenhouse gases have increased the earth's temperature until 1,5(sorry, do you mean 1.5? if so it should be "upto" not "until".) degrees grades Fahrenheit: this has is a negative effects on for the environment like the water scarcity and the extinction of numerous plants and animals.
In the last few years, the USA's weather stations have recorded an the increase in of the temperature at in the North – East area of the country, which was is increased serial several degrees Fahrenheit.
The worst effects of greatest negative effects about the temperature change are during the in winter season (from to December until March) in the rural area of the North - East, because it damages a one big sector of the economy:, the skiing tourism, especially sky centers, hotels, restaurants and gift shops.
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