Personal statement for university application
I have managed to get my B.S. and Master's degree at two top universities in Iran. I think publishing three journal papers about my field of study is one of my greatest accomplishments during my education. I also managed to learn English quite well which is necessary for continuing my education abroad. I got very high scores of TOEFL and GRE exam which can prove my claims. I was not only a good student at college who is very good at his studies, but also a good contributor to my society. I managed to work as a volunteer at a charity organization which is providing education facilities for working children.
Therefore I think I can be a good Ph.D. student for the university. I am hard worker as well as resourceful and I think I can contribute to the project which you are working on already. I've managed to specialize in this field and my publications show that. As a result I think I can be the candidate you are looking for.
I think I'll have gotten my Ph.D. degree within 5 years from now on. I also hope that I'll have published more journal papers by that time. I'd like to have started my own company after finishing the PhD. course and have provided some job opportunities for younger students. I also hope that I'll have become a more mature and sophisticated person at the end of the course which might be the best reward of studying at the university for me beside the educational goals.
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Personal statement for university application
I have managed to get my B.S (Bachelor of Science or bachelor's) and Master's (master's or Master of Science/Arts) degrees at two top universities in Iran. I think For me, publishing three journal papers about (within) my field of study has been one of my greatest accomplishments during my education. I also managed to learn English quite well, which is necessary for continuing my education abroad. I got very high scores of on both theTOEFL and GRE exam which can prove my claimsI wouldn't use this wording. It sounds harsh/bragging (attest to my mastery /proficiency in Englsih) . I was not only a good student at college who is (was) very good at his studies, but I was also a good contributor to my society. I managed to work worked as a volunteer at a charity organization which is providing (provides) educational facilities for (to) working children.Therefore, I think I can be a good candidate for the Ph.D (mention it program) at your university (mention the specific university) . I am hard worker as well as resourceful, and I think I can contribute to the project which you are working on already (and am certain that I could be an effective collaborator on the project on which you are currently working_) I've managed to specialize ( I have become an expert in my field) in this field and my publications show that(, as evidenced by my publications) As a result, I think (I am certain that) I can be the candidate you are looking for (an ideal candidate for your program)
The second part needs quite a bit of work. Could you state what the essay is asking for?
Google only :انگلیسی شما خوب و قابل فهم است، اما مقاله خود را تا حدی مبهم است . من در دولت در آموزش عالی کار، و شما نیاز به انجام تحقیقات خود را در مورد برنامه دکتری خاص. شما همچنین باید نام دانشگاه اشاره کرد.من می توانم یک همکار که فارسی صحبت می کند به خواندن مقاله خود را بپرسید. وی دکترای خود را به دست آورده. برخی از نظرات خود را نیز سخت و متظاهر صدا. اما من فکر می کنم این دلیل است که شما ممکن است به طور کامل با تفاوت های ظریف از انگلیسی آشنا. این کار دارد.
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