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new discovery today is the fisrt day of the three-day holiday. unfortunately it is a rainy day. i have to stay at home instead . but i think it is ok. i can also enjoy myself by learning english on italki and i can make friends here as well. for me , i think it is a good place to hang out! do you agree?

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new discovery

today is the fisrt  first day of the three-day holiday. unfortunately it is a rainy day so i have to stay at home instead . but i think it that is ok. i can also enjoy myself by learning english on italki and i can make friends here as well. for me , i think it this is a good place to hang out! do you agree? 


Technically your notebook entry is entirely correct, however there are small grammar errors. I won't go too in depth but your pronoun it that refers to a situation is more appropriately replaced by that and the other "it" that refers to Italki is more appropriately replaced by this. 

Great job by the way!

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New discovery

Today is the first  fisrt day of a the three-day holiday. Unfortunately it is a rainy day, and I will  have to stay at home instead. but i think it is That's ok. I can also enjoy myself by learning English on italki and I can make friends here as well. for me , I think it is a good place to hang out! Do you agree?

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it is Labour Day in China
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Could you describe/explain this holiday? :)

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