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Please help me correct my news translation ,thanks :) Below is my news translation, the news I use belongs to a Chinese website. The original is following the translation. Please correct my news translation ,thanks :) The prospect of encryption technology is infinite. Moxie Marlinspike: the founder of OPEN WHISPER SYSTEMS 莫西·马琳斯巴克(Moxie Marlinspike):OPEN WHISPER SYSTEMS 创始人 As governments keep watch on network communications more and more frequently, the safety of users' privacy will be under threat because of the encrypted information. Since November in 2014, WhatsApp, owned by Facebook, made a significant improvement on Android version: encrypted user communication information, even though Facebook has no ability to crack them.Whatever orders the court issued, Facebook could do nothing, because the encryption software was programmed by Marlinspike who was funded by third party instead of Facebook employees. 3 years ago, Twitter's safety technology expert Marlinspike resigned, he hoped he can do something to help the Internet worldwide communications more safety.For now, the WhatsApp users using ios version and other versions benefit through encryption services. Marlinspike says, he is negotiating with several companies to persuade them to use his encryption software. 随着政府对网络通信的监视越来越严格,传输非加密信息将危及用户隐私安全。2014年11月,社交网络Facebook旗下通讯应用Whatsapp对其安卓版本进行重大改进:加密用户交流信息,即使Facebook也不能读取它们。无论法庭下达多少命令,Facebook对此无能为力,因为编写加密软件的不是Facebook员工,而是受第三方资助的马琳斯巴克。 3年前,Twitter安全技术专家马琳斯巴克离职,他希望能帮助全球互联网通信变得更安全,因此他允许全世界的网络公司免费使用自己的软件。现在,WhatsApp iOS版和其他平台版本的2.2亿用户已经可以享受其加密服务。马琳斯巴克表示,他正与多家公司谈判,希望他们能够使用自己的加密软件。

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Please help me correct my news translation ,thanks :)

Below is my news translation, the news I use belongs to a Chinese website.
The original is following the translation.
Please correct my news translation ,thanks :)

The prospect of encryption technology is infinite.
Moxie Marlinspike: the founder of OPEN WHISPER SYSTEMS

莫西·马琳斯巴克(Moxie Marlinspike):OPEN WHISPER SYSTEMS 创始人

As governments keep watch on network communications more and more frequently, the safety of users' privacy will be under threat because of the encrypted information. Since November in 2014, WhatsApp, owned by Facebook, made a significant improvement on an Android version: encrypted user communication information, even though Facebook has no ability to crack them.Whatever orders the court issued, Facebook could do nothing, because the encryption software was programmed by Marlinspike who was funded by a third party instead of Facebook employees.
3 years ago, Twitter's safety and technology expert Marlinspike resigned, he hoped he can could do something to help the Internet worldwide communications more safety safely.For now, the WhatsApp users who using use the ios version and other versions benefit through encryption services. Marlinspike says, no comma here he is negotiating with several companies to persuade them to use his encryption software.

随着政府对网络通信的监视越来越严格,传输非加密信息将危及用户隐私安全。2014年11月,社交网络Facebook旗下通讯应用Whatsapp对其安卓版本进行重大改进:加密用户交流信息,即使Facebook也不能读取它们。无论法庭下达多少命令,Facebook对此无能为力,因为编写加密软件的不是Facebook员工,而是受第三方资助的马琳斯巴克。
3年前,Twitter安全技术专家马琳斯巴克离职,他希望能帮助全球互联网通信变得更安全,因此他允许全世界的网络公司免费使用自己的软件。现在,WhatsApp iOS版和其他平台版本的2.2亿用户已经可以享受其加密服务。马琳斯巴克表示,他正与多家公司谈判,希望他们能够使用自己的加密软件。


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