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Ally-婉er的diary: Mar 29, 2011 Today, i finally finishied my parttime job , i sale washing machine ,air conditioning and refrigerator of Midea. i had do this job for five days and earn 300 yuan for myself .Earning money is not an easy thing,this is what i felt in the past time . i had bought a sleeping mask on the Internet,make in Korea, i am so expected it, hope it can make me moere beauty .haha

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Ally-婉er的diary: Mar 29, 2011

Today, I finally finishied my part-time job , I sale sell Midea washing machines ,air conditioning and refrigerators. 

I had do this job for five days and earn 300 yuan for myself.  I worked at this job for five days and (I) earned 300 yuan.  ("I had to do this job..." has the connotation of you being forced to work there, or that you had no choice.  You do not need to say "for myself" here because you are already the subject - only the subject of the phrase earns something)

Earning money is not an easy thing, this is what I felt in the past time.  
I´m not sure if this is what you are trying to say, but try-  This job has taught me that earning money is not easy.

I  had have bought a sleeping mask on the Internet, make made in Korea, i am so expected it, I am looking forward to receiving it.  I hope it can make me moere beauty more beautiful .haha

("i" should always be capitalised)

Hope this helps :)

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A sleeping mask does not make you more beautiful. Its for people which have problems to fall asleep because in their room is maybe too much light and they need total darkness for their eyes. 300 Yuan for 5 days? It sounds not bad. But why they let you just work for 5 days and call this a part-time job?

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