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Hello, everyone! My name is XX from YY. I am a cyclist. I rode from Hanoi, Viet Nam to Bali, Indonesia. Yesterday I flew to Yangon from Bali, and I planned to cycle back to Hanoi. Unluckily, the airline lost my luggage. The lost luggage is three bags. I packed my bike pedals and some other accessories into one of the lost bags. Now I want to buy the bike accessories I need. Could you please tell me where I can find a bike shop?
Thanks very much.
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A short article. please help check it and correct it, English native-speakers. Thanks
Hello, everyone! My name is YX from XY. I am a cyclist. I rode from Hanoi, Viet Nam to Bali, Indonesia. Yesterday I flew to Yangon from Bali, and I planned to cycle back to Hanoi. Unluckily, the airline lost my luggage. The lost luggage is three bags. I packed my bike pedals and some other accessories into one of the lost bags. Now I want to buy the bike accessories I need. Could you please tell me where I can find a bike shop?Thanks very much.
Very well written! I could not find any mistakes.
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