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Can you help me with my introduction? So I wanted to write a little introduction in Japanese for my profile, and while I used vocabulary I have learnt myself, I used google translate to type into so I could switch it to hiragana/kanji (does anyone know a better way to do it?) So please correct away! ( some of this I think I could change up, for example I could have put 'Evelyn to iimasu' rather than 'watashi no namae wa Evelyn') I just wanted to get used to seeing some of the Kanji. はじめまして!私 の名前 は Evelynです 。Evie と よんでください!私のにほんごはあまりじょうずじゃありません。でも、べんきょうがだいすき、楽しです。日本のぶんかはおもしろい!ひまのとき、りょうりをするのがすきです、日本のたべものいちばんすき。 What I'm trying to say... Nice to meet you! My name is Evelyn, Please call me Evie! My Japanese isn't that good but I love studying it, its fun! Japanese culture is interesting. When I have free time I like to cook, Japanese food is my favorite. (also even if something is correct, but there is a more natural sounding way, please let me know) thanks in advance!

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Can you help me with my introduction?

So I wanted to write a little introduction in Japanese for my profile, and while I used vocabulary I have learnt myself, I used google translate to type into so I could switch it to hiragana/kanji (does anyone know a better way to do it?)

So please correct away! ( some of this I think I could change up, for example I could have put 'Evelyn to iimasu' rather than 'watashi no namae wa Evelyn') I just wanted to get used to seeing some of the Kanji.

はじめまして!私 の名前 は Evelynです 。Evie と よんでください!私のにほんごはあまりじょうずじゃありません。でも、べんきょうがだいすき、楽しです。日本のぶんかはおもしろい!ひまのとき、りょうりをするのがすきです、日本のたべものいちばんすき。

What I'm trying to say...
Nice to meet you! My name is Evelyn, Please call me Evie! My Japanese isn't that good but I love studying it, its fun! Japanese culture is interesting. When I have free time I like to cook, Japanese food is my favorite.

(also even if something is correct, but there is a more natural sounding way, please let me know)

thanks in advance!

Hi Evie

Your Japanese is good enough to understand what you mean.

I just want to correct a little part.

はじめまして!私 の名前 は Evelynです 。Evie と よんでください!私のにほんごはあまりじょうずじゃありません。でも、べんきょうがだいすき、楽しいです。日本のぶんかはおもしろい!ひまなとき、りょうりをするのがすきです、日本のたべものがいちばんすきです。

If you want to show perfect Japanese with Kanji

はじめまして!私の名前はEvelynです。Evieと呼んでください。私の日本語はまだあまり上手じゃありません。でも、勉強することが大好きで、楽しいです。日本の文化は面白いです!

時間のある時に料理をするのが好きです。私は日本の食べ物が一番好きです。

よろしくお願いします。

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