Din's notebook entry: Mar 29, 2011
today. it was a long day. at first: since morning I have felt any suspect something is going bad (or bed, no good at last)/ And when i arrived at work and look at mirror I was embarassing/ My hair need in big brush/ but i forgot it at home in the bathroom/ And all day I was going like a witch. Now I am going to arrange my hair/ maybe straighten/ today i had E lesson/ it was funny/ i did many mistakes and my teacher angryed/ i was embarrassed/ at last I fell down (slipped) on a road in my country it is means Winter Came Back!!! (it is not normally in that time) Bye
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Din's notebook entry: Mar 29, 2011
Today was a long day. Firstly I had a suspicion that something was wrong from early in the morning. And when I arrived at work and looked in the mirror, I was embarassed. My hair needed a big brushing but I had forgotten my brush at home in the bathroom I looked like a witch all day. Now I am going to a fix my hair, maybe straighten it. Today I had an E lesson. It was funny. I made many mistakes and my teacher was angry. I was embarrassed! Finally I slipped on a road in my town. This was because winter has come back!!! It is not normal for this time of year. ByeI had to guess some corrections as I wasn't sure what you meant. Hope it's okay :)
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