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A beautiful city--Tianjin I was born in Tianjin,and grow up in there too.It is a attractive city.You must be here if you have a chance. The most famous of Tianjin must be The eyes of Tianjin.A sky wheel on the Haihe River.Lots of people stay there at night everyday.Staying beside the river,you can see a big colorized circle on the river,and there is another one in the river.

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A beautiful city--Tianjin

I was born in and grew up in Tianjin,and grow up in there too. It is an attractive city. You must be visit here if you have a chance.
The most famous landmark of Tianjin must be The eyes of Tianjin, a sky wheel on the Haihe River. Lots of people visit it every night. stay there at night everyday. Staying I you stand beside the river, you can see a big coloured  colorized circle reflected on the river/water. and there is another one in the river.

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A beautiful city--Tianjin

I was born in Tianjin, and grew up in there too. It is an attractive city. You must be here visit this place if you have a chance.
The most famous of thing about Tianjin must be The eyes of Tianjin. A sky wheel on the Haihe River. Lots of people stay there at every night everyday. Staying Sitting beside the river, you can see a big colorized colourful circle on above the river, and there is another one reflected on the river.


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