Note: I was really impressed with this essay!  In many cases your word choice was correct, but I edited to use a common phrase or colloquialism as an example.

The purpose we work for

Those who emphasize whether the job is pleasure, focus on job satisfaction takes make their jobs in the center of their lives. For them, the job equals to is their private lives life. Even though they earn a lot of high salary, they are never satisfied with boring working uninteresting work. Some people of them tend to ignore their families, because they are extremely fascinated by engrossed in their jobs.

On the other hand, it appears that people who focus on salary, take separate their jobs apart from their private lives. They consider of their jobs producers of a means to their salary, and their salary is used to enable them to live delightfully.

In my opinion, it is dangerous to prefer how jobs make us enjoy than how much salary we can earn prioritize job satisfaction over salary. It is because it is impossible that Our jobs always will never fully satisfy us. Sometimes we must engage in work which that is not constructive. Also we have to obey our boss, even if the order is not useful for us productive. The job which we choose can possibly change their figure our future to what in ways we have never imagined. It means that People who take make their job in the main part focus of their lives will have worthless lives be miserable when they have to do useless work. It is better to build cultivate a manifest border clean separation between jobs and private lives.