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Dear Changmin 창민 오빠에게, 안녕하세요! 잘 지내였나요? 난 좋을 수 없어요. 어제 밤 프롬을 갔어요. 저기는 내 심장 부서진 것 같아는 뒤었어요. 오늘에 울어는 있어요. 그런대 프롬에 내가 가장 높은 여자를 있었어요!!~~ 난 3인치 하이힐을 입었어요. (6피트 1인치 크다). 키가 대박!! 오! 난 창믄 오빠에게 한국에 갈께라고 말었어요. 근대 안갈께요. :'( 진짜 슬퍼요. 근대 한국어를 계속 공부할께요. 한국어를 아주아주 좋아해요!! 근대 난 창민 오빠 나를 이해하기를 바라요. 창민 오빠의 "Gold Dust" 노래는 고마워요. 비통함을 도와요. ~리디아 English: Dear Changmin, Hello! Have you been well? I could be doing better. Last night I went to prom. My heart got broken there. Today I've been crying. However, I was the tallest girl at prom! I wore 3 inch high heels. (I was 6'1 tall) Being tall is awesome!! Oh! I told you that I was going to Korea. But [actually] I'm not. I'm really sad. :'( But I will continue to study Korean. I really really like Korean!! So, I hope you understand me. Thank you for your song "Gold Dust". It really helps with the heartbreak. ~Lydia **please let me know if a certain phrase sounds awkward and how to more naturally say it. :) thanks!!

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Dear Changmin

창민 오빠에게,
안녕하세요! 잘 지냈어요?
난 잘 지내지 못했어요. 어제 밤 프롬에 갔었어요 내 심장이 부서진 것 곳,,
그리고 오늘 하루종일 울었어요.암튼 프롬에서 내가  키가 제일 큰 여자였어요!!~~  3인치 하이힐을 신었거든요 (내 키는 6피트 1인치). 키 큰 느낌 대박 좋네요! 

오빠한테 한국에 갈거라고 말했었는데  안갈게에요. :'( 진짜 슬퍼요. 하지만 한국어 공부는 계속 할거에요. 한국어를  너무 좋아해요!!

창민오빠가 날 좀 이해해줬으면 좋겠어요.

창민 오빠의 "Gold Dust" 노래 고마웠어요. 나한테 큰 위로였거든요.

~리디아

English:
Dear Changmin,
Hello! Have you been well? I could be doing better. Last night I went to prom. My heart got broken there. Today I've been crying. However, I was the tallest girl at prom! I wore 3 inch high heels. (I was 6'1 tall) Being tall is awesome!!

Oh! I told you that I was going to Korea. But [actually] I'm not. I'm really sad. :'( But I will continue to study Korean. I really really like Korean!!

So, I hope you understand me.

Thank you for your song "Gold Dust". It really helps with the heartbreak.

~Lydia

**please let me know if a certain phrase sounds awkward and how to more naturally say it. :) thanks!!

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