Is there anyone who can correct my writing?! D: I highly appreciate it! "Hey Alex! It’s good to hear that you have passed your exam and your parents just gave you some money to splash out! So, you wanted me to help you out to decide on whether buying a new computer game or saving up in order to get more clothes. I think that the best option by far is saving up a bit more money so you can get all the fancy clothes you like to wear. It’s also a good thing having new clothes for the next semester of the university, because you are in the last year and now it’s a important to impress the people you study with in order to get a better contact network, which will definitely will help you to get better job offers. I really hope that these reasons have helped you to make up your mind! See you around, Alexis"