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please help me to correct this email, thanks! Dear Dan, Long time no see. How are you? I'm doing well in Chengdu, sunny day today. So glad to hear from you, darling, I thought I send a email to you probably 1 month ago, I miss you so much but I can't contact you and I'm very worried about you, I've asked MiaoSa, she said you are probably traveling. Since I am a Monkey in the Chinese horoscope, this is my big year seems like I'm one of the lucky one's. But, I've got a terrible chronic antrum gastritis in this January, and I take Chinese Traditional Medicine all the time. Fortunately, the herbs is quite effective. Meanwhile, I can never taste strong flavor food in Sichuan. I'm working for a coffee store in Chengdu with my boyfriend Dylan. Learning how to make coffee and Latte Art is funny and I've learned a lot of from it. Also I do CrossFit training sometimes here, as the weather will soon get warm. How's your home the SpringField? There is a big news in my life, I'm preparing for the International English Language Testing System(IELTS) in order to get the Working Holiday Visa(WHV) to go to the New Zealand two years later. My English move backwards since I leave America, the IELTS is really hard for me like CrossFit, but that's the only way for me to go to New Zealand on the cheap. Have you ever been to NZ? How about it? Will you come to Chengdu in May? So sorry I'm not in Hunan, if you come to Chengdu, may I make a cup of coffee for you? What kind of would you like? Tell me and let me practice more form today.:) Hope you everything goes well, talk to you soon! Bear hugs and kisses!:) Yours, Taylor

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please help me to correct this email, thanks!

Dear Dan,

Long time no see. How are you?

I'm doing well in Chengdu, and its sunny today.

So glad to hear from you, darling. I thought I sent an email to you probably 1 month ago. I miss you so much but I can't contact you and I'm very worried about you. I've asked MiaoSa, and she said you are probably traveling.

Since I am a Monkey in the Chinese horoscope, this is my big year and it seems like I'm one of the lucky one's. But, I've got a terrible chronic antrum gastritis this month of January, and I take a Chinese Traditional Medicine all the time. Fortunately, the herb is quite effective. At this time, I cannot taste strong flavored foods in Sichuan.

I'm working for a coffee store in Chengdu with my boyfriend Dylan. Learning how to make coffee and Latte Art is funny, and I've learned a lot from it. Also, I do CrossFit training some here as the weather will soon gets warmer. How's your home in SpringField?

There is a big news in my life. I'm preparing for the International English Language Testing System(IELTS) in order to get the Working Holiday Visa(WHV) to go to New Zealand two years later. My English regresses since I left America, and the IELTS is really hard for me like CrossFit, but that's the only way for me to go to New Zealand on the cheap.

Have you ever been to NZ? How about it?

Will you come to Chengdu in May? So sorry I'm not in Hunan, but if you come to Chengdu, may I make a cup of coffee for you? What kind would you like? Tell me and let me practice more today.:)

Hope everything goes well, and talk to you soon!

Bear hugs and kisses!:)

Yours,

Taylor

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