Past simple? fullstop, comma?
Today, I got up at eight o'clock, after I had breakfast milk and cookies. When I finished I went to running. I got a shower and I read for one hour. I tired to read and I started to play to the video game console. At a quarter past two I ate a roast beef with potatoes. When I ended I took a siesta until six p.m.. I went to class. At nine I arranged to meet with my frinds to see the match, we has dinner a frankfurt and drunk a beer. I got home at half past eleven. I brushed my teeth and I went to bed.
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Past simple? fullstop, comma?
Today, I got up at eight o'clock, after getting up/later I had a breakfast of milk and cookies. When I finished I went to running. I had got a shower and I read for one hour. I tired to read and I started to play with to the video game console. At a quarter past two I ate a roast beef with potatoes. When I ended had finished I took a siesta until six p.m.. I went to class. At nine I arranged to meet with my friends to watch see the match, we has dinner a ate frankfurters and drank a beer. I got home at half past eleven. I brushed my teeth and I went to bed.
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