Essay FCE "We must look after the world"
The pollution is one of the most dangerous problems. Nowadays, there are a lot of organizations that fight for a best world. However, this is not enough. We need the aid of everybody. In this essay, I will try that people think about the importance of looking after the environment.
First of all, it is necessary doing ourselves these questions, What are we doing to protect the environment? ¿Do we recycle? ¿How many times do we use our car? The answer to these questions are crucial.
If we start to be aware of our acts, and we start to change them, then, we will increase our level of life. It starts to use the bicycle more than the car could be a good beginning
On the other hand, from my point of view, the political parties must encourage the good acts. For example, Giving an extra money to the people who take part in acts to protect the environment.
To sum up, each person has the responsibility of looking after the environment. Everybody should respect the nature because if not, we will regret in the future.
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Essay FCE "We must look after the world"
ThePollution is one of the most dangerous problems in the world. Nowadays, there are a lot of organizations that fight for a bestbetter world. However, this is not enough. We need the aid help of everybody. In this essay, I will try argue(?) that people should(?) think about the importance of looking after the environment.First of all, it is necessary doing to ask ourselves these questions., What are we doing to protect the environment? ¿Do we recycle? ¿How many times do we use our car? The answer to these questions are crucial.
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Algunas sugerencias para su primeros párrafos. Buen trabajo.
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