Rogue One Trailer I watched the trailer of Rogue One that was released yesterday. It was great! Look at the costume of the woman played by Felicity Jones! That's so cool! She seems to be with the Rebe

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Rogue One Trailer I watched the trailer of Rogue One that was released yesterday. It was great! Look at the costume of the woman played by Felicity Jones! That's so cool! She seems to be with the Rebellion, but at the end of the trailer, she wears a pilot suit on which there is a mark of Galactic Empire. Is she a spy? I also watched some review videos of the trailer. I was surprised how much speculation they could make from this two-minute long trailer. I don't have as much knowledge as them, so it's a lot of fun to listening to their talk.

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Rogue One Trailer

I watched the trailer of Rogue One that was released yesterday. It was great! Look at the costume of the woman played by Felicity Jones! That's so cool! She seems to be with the Rebellion, but at the end of the trailer, she wears a pilot suit on which there is a mark of Galactic Empire. Is she a spy? I also watched some review videos of the trailer. I was surprised how much speculation they could make from this two-minute long trailer. I don't have as much knowledge as them, so it's a lot of fun to listening to their talk.

Your writing was very good. You had one very small mistake. By the way (BTW), I thought the Rogue One trailer was awesome too!!

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Rogue One Trailer

I watched the trailer for Rogue One that was released yesterday. It was great! Look at the costume of the woman played by Felicity Jones! It's so cool! She seems to be with the Rebellion, but at the end of the trailer, she wears a pilot suit on which there is a mark of Galactic Empire. Is she a spy? I also watched some review videos of the trailer. I was surprised by how much they could say from this two-minute long trailer (1). I don't have as much knowledge as them, so it's a lot of fun to listening to them talk.

1. I would say this differently. "I was surprised by how many clues they found in a two-minute trailer", or "I was surprised by how much information they found in a two minute trailer".

Very well written. Almost entirely correct, and very conversational. Well done!

Rogue One Trailer

I watched the trailer of 'Rogue One', a flim that was released yesterday. It was great! Just look at the costume of the woman played by Felicity Jones! That's so cool! She seems to be with the Rebellion, but at the end of the trailer, she wears a pilot suit on which there is a mark of Galactic Empire. Is she a spy? I also watched some review videos of the trailer. I was surprised how much speculation they could make* from this two-minute long trailer. I don't have as much knowledge as them, so it's a lot of fun to listening** to their talk.

*or, I was surprised how much they could speculate on this 2...

**or, ... a lot of fun listening to their talk, or a lot of fun (to listen) to their talk. (=IMPORTANT): after 'to' comes the infinitive of the verb, eg. to find, to see, to walk, to listen, ....

Very well written!

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