Writing about a travel
I’m going to write about my last holidays. I was with my family in China. We were there for two months and it was an amazing experience. We choose to go there because we wanted to know others cultures and the Chinese culture looks different…well, really it’s different. The buildings are incredible and people looks happy, always smiling¡¡ We usually buy something on website Chinese and there, we could see how they make it and the postal service system is incredible too.
The problems on China are the pollution and the traffic…too many cars¡¡ Also, other problem was the commute…20 hours traveling¡¡ That’s too much for us.
For this reason, I don’t think we come back there.
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Writing about a trip
I’m going to write about my last holiday. I went with my family to China. We were there for two months and it was an amazing experience. We chose to go there because we wanted to learn about other cultures and the Chinese culture seemed different… well, it’s really different. The buildings are incredible and the people look happy- always smiling. We usually buy things on Chinese websites but while we were there, we could see how they make things. The postal service system is incredible too.The problems in China are the pollution and the traffic…too many cars. Also, another problem was the travel time…20 hours traveling!! That’s too much for us.
For this reason, I don’t think we'll go back there.
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