My letter to Carol.
Dear Carol!
Hi! What's up? I haven't written to you for so long time because I was very busy. I decided drop you a line.
At the beginning three weeks ago I bought new application on my mobile phone. This app can me remember new English words and sentences if I learn regulary.
I can learn English words in every places. For example I can in the bus, car, quene. This is very comfortable. What's more. I love this application.
After three weeks, I know many words. I'm very satisfied with a progress. What's more. I recomende this application to people who want to learn more.
All in all. I hope, that you will be glad, that I write to you. I'm waiting for your response.
Lots of love.
Iza.
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My letter to Carol.
Dear Carol!Hi! What's up?* I haven't written to you for such a long time because I was very busy. I decided to drop you a line.
Three weeks ago I bought a new application for my mobile phone. This app can help me remember new English words and sentences if I learn regularly.
I can learn English words in anywhere. For example I can learn in the bus, car, queue etc. This is very comfortable. What's more, I love this application.
After three weeks, I know many words. I'm very satisfied with my progress. What's more, I recommend this application to people who want to learn more.
All in all. I hope, that you will be glad, that I write to you. I'm waiting for your response.
Lots of love.
Iza.
Very well written, just a few small errors.
*the sky? No, it's a poor joke.**
**But bluebottle can never resist it! ;)
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My letter to Carol.
Dear Carol!Hi! What's up? I haven't written to you for so long time because I was have been very busy. I decided to drop you a line.
At the beginning Three weeks ago I bought a new application on my mobile phone. This app can me remember teaches me new English words and sentences if I learn regulary.
I can learn English words in every places for example I can in the bus, car, a quenue etc. This is very comfortable convenient. What's more is that I love this application.
After about three weeks, I know many words. I'm very satisfied with a my progress. What's more. I reccomend this application to people who want to learn more a language.
All in all I hope that you will be glad that I write to you. I'm waiting for your response.
Lots of love.
Iza.
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My letter to Carol.
Dear Carol!Hi! What's up? I haven't written to you for so long time because I was very busy. I decided drop you a line.
At the beginning three weeks ago I bought new application on my mobile phone. This app can me remember me new English words and sentences if I learn regulary.
I can learn English words in every places / everywhere. For example I can in the bus, car, quene. This is very comfortable. What's more. I love this application.
After three weeks, I know many words. I'm very satisfied with a progress. What's more. I recomende this application to people who want to learn more.
All in all. I hope, that you will be glad, that I write to you. I'm waiting for your response.
Lots of love.
Iza.
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