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Setting A Goal These days I feel like I am pretty lost since I don't have a specific goal my life. In fact, I do have a goal which is a long term goal. I am going to study in Germany from this September and wanting to carry on my studies there as well afterwards. I had been working on really hard to get the opportunity. But the thing is once I got it, I kind of don't know what to do next. I just started to learn German and it isn't easy at all for sure. It is very challenging and giving me some sort of pressure. In addition, this is a silly reason, but as the weather is changing here in Korea my body seems confused and tired. I sneeze quite often and not feeling very well In conclusion, I am kind of feeling down! What should I do?

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Setting A Goal

These days I feel like I am pretty lost since I don't have a specific goal my life. Actually In fact, I do have a goal which is a long term goal. I am going to study in Germany from starting this September and I wanting to carry on my studies there as well afterwards. I had have been working on really hard to get for the opportunity. But the thing is once now that I got it, I kind of don't know what to do next.
I just started to learn German and it isn't easy at all, that's for sure. It is very challenging and sometimes this stresses me. giving me some sort of pressure.
In addition, and this is a silly reason, but as the weather is changing here in Korea, my body seems confused and tired. I sneeze quite often and not I don't feeling very well.
In conclusion, I am kind of feeling down! What should I do?


Pretty good writing HyunWook, it's rather fluent. Some small points:

1) The difference between actually and in fact. How should I explain it... I would use in fact, when you are about to say something that agrees with the previous statement. For example: I like to eat apples. In fact, I eat five a day. or I don't agree with what you're saying. In fact, I find it quite offensive.

On the other hand, actually can be used to contradict your previous statement, particularly during speech. For example: I'm not hungry. [pause]. Actually, maybe I'll have something to eat. Or, I don't see him. [pause]. Actually, I think that's him over there!

2) If you're unsure, you should probably use a subject rather than omit it.

3) In English we don't say: this is giving me a sort of pressure. Instead, we can say: it's stressing me or I feel stressed by it. I feel really stressed out means it's giving you a big headache.

4) In English we use 'don't' to negate many statements. I don't know why (there you go...I just did it). For example: I see him. I don't see him. I ate the apple. I didn't eat the apple. I play hockey on Wednesday. I don't play hockey on Wednesday. An example where we don't use don't is the present/past continuous. Eg. I am eating. I'm not eating. I was going to the cinema. I wasn't going to the cinema.

Hope that helps.

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