My viewpoint on a happy marriage

Nowadays, there is no consensus of opinions among people as to whether marriage is the tomb of love and love is the shackle of freedom. Some people say it is true while others take an opposite stance, firmly believing that marriage is crystallization the product as well as a witness of love.
As far as I'm concerned, the latter opinion holds more weight. Indeed, it is there are many benefits to a good marriage that benefits us a lot. My reasons can be listed as follows. For one thing, after married, they married people often don't feel lonely any more, because they can share their with sharing happiness and sorrow with each other. Furthermore For another, the research has shown acknowledged that the figures show that married people live longer than everyone else and they will be immersed in happiness.
Undoubtedly, a harmonious marriage is vital to everyone, just as the saying goes, "He is the happiest, be the king or peasant, who finds beauty in his home.”

So, can we find the ways to have a lasting and happy marriage? There are several ways to create and maintain such a marriage. Firstly, not only should one overcome one's selfishness being self-centered, but also value one's lifestyle and to get rid of your rid oneself of dirty habits, if there are any. Secondly, one should be brave to face the possible difficulties and try one's best to treat all disasters as incidents, and none of incidents as disasters. Thirdly, one should learn to listen, forgive and appreciate.
In short, to succeed in marriage, the couple should show each other mutual respect, and pursue healthy lifestyles and maintain a positive outlooks in your lives.

Well done, it's not easy to write on this topic. Small points:

You should't capitalise words unless they are proper nouns or the start of a sentence.

Consensus means agreed opinion among people, so don't repeat it.

You shouldn't start a sentence with "For another"