Introduction in Cantonese
你好我叫miki好開心認識你. 我係獸醫. 上年我畢業做. 我喜愛動物而我有兩隻貓.
我嘅興趣係針織而縫紉. 我中意電子游戲而見電視放鬆. 我彈奏小提琴而彈奏交響樂團.
我係英國人,London 黎. 我同我未婚夫一齊住. 我學廣東話因為我想去香港. 我爸爸有時會去香港返工因此我去做一曾經. 我想見面人而做朋友.
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Dear Miki,
Good work! it is coherent and good use of words! Next time please try to put them in a better word order, then it would be perfect!
你好我叫miki good!
好開心認識你. good!
我係獸醫. 上年我畢業之後開始做獸醫.
我鍾意動物。我有兩隻貓.
我嘅興趣係針織同縫紉. good!
我鍾意玩電子遊戲同睇電視去放鬆下.
我拉小提琴，同埋喺交響樂團演奏.
我係英國人,喺London 嚟.
我同我未婚夫一齊住. good!
我學廣東話因為我想去香港. good!
我爸爸有時會去香港公幹，所以我去過香港.
我想同人見面，做朋友.
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Introduction in Cantonese
你好我叫miki好開心認識你.舊年我畢業之後開始做獸醫. 我鐘意動物，而我有兩隻貓.我嘅興趣係針織同埋縫紉. 我中意玩電子游戲同埋睇電視放鬆. 我識得用小提琴彈奏交響樂團啲音樂.
我係英國人,從London(倫敦） 黎. 我同我未婚夫一齊住. 我學廣東話係因為我想去香港. 我爸爸有時會去香港返工，所以我曾經去過香港. 我想同人見面然之後做朋友.
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你好，我叫miki，好高興可以認識到你. 我係獸醫. 上年岩岩畢業就做左獸醫。我鐘意動物。我有兩隻貓.
我係英國人,倫敦黎嘅. 我同我未婚夫一齊住. 我學廣東話，因為我想去香港. 我老竇有時會去香港返工，所以我一齊去埋. 我想識多滴朋友。
Tips: Be simple.
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Introduction in Cantonese
你好我叫miki好開心認識你. (correct)我係(一名）（you should have preposition here）獸醫.
上年我畢業做.
我喜愛動物而(‘而’means ‘and’ ,so you should use "所以”）我有兩隻貓.
我嘅興趣係針織而(the same as bofore）縫紉.我中意電子游戲而見電視放鬆. 我彈奏小提琴而彈奏交響樂團.
我係英國人,（从）London 黎.
我同我未婚夫一齊住.（correct）
我學廣東話因為我想去香港.（correct）
我爸爸有時會去香港返工因此我去做一曾經.
我想見面人而做朋友.（sorry I can't understand what you said here but the grammar is right）
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Introduction in Cantonese
你好我叫miki好開心認識你. 我係獸醫. 上年我畢咗業做. 我喜愛動物而我,有兩隻貓.我嘅興趣係針織同縫紉. 我中意電子游戲同見電視放鬆. 我喺交響樂團彈奏小提琴.
我係英國人,London 黎. 我同我未婚夫一齊住. 我學廣東話因為我想去香港. 我爸爸有時會去香港返工,所以我去過香港. 我想識朋友.
p o i n t :
1 . 上年我畢咗業=上年畢業
2 . "而" → adversative relation , example : 我中意針織而我未婚夫中意寫作。
3 . "同埋" → coordinative relation
4. 我彈奏小提琴而彈奏交響樂團. may i know what's your mean? u can give me your English sentence. 我喺交響樂團彈奏小提琴 → i'm playing violin in symphony orchestra
我識得用小提琴彈奏交響樂團嘅音樂 → I can playing the piece of symphony orchestra with violin.
5. " 我想識朋友 " is more simpler.
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