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My hometowm Where can I find the place To feel happy with a smiling face ( or To feel happy, calm, without chase) To smell flavor all around And never hold emotions down. Mykolaiv is my native land With acacias’ blossom and the width of grassland. Its like a river that is always fast, It’s a source of energy that will never be past. All the roads are leading me here And it’s a dream of every sightseer. And the sun is the brightest here, And the birds sing louder here! My Mykolaiv, my hometown, You are washed by two rivers They are like playing fountains That making the waves’ mountains. Mykolaiv is a shipbuilding city And here people are really witty. This city is full of bright colours Which u can see during warm summers. Mykolaiv is the city of brides You can find them easily without any guides. Mykolaiv is the city of wheat fields And we are proud of power that our city wields. Picturesque meadows and uninhabited steppe Are better to see urself but not in the web. Mykolaiv is beautiful one And u can have here a lot of fun. The best zoo in Ukraine is also here And be sure that it can endear. Theatres, monuments and museums Will give you a lot of new ideas. Every street, every park, every square Is a treasure house that we need to spare. All of them can tell us their story And open some bright moments of glory. Admiralska Street is one of the best It’s like a museum where u can rest. There buildings are older and newer And Drama Theatre is waiting its viewer. Soborna Street is the main in the town And the Central Boulevard is the widest one. Nikolska Street is crowded with students And they have a lot of amusements. Every part of my town, Every street, every tree, all around Keep all secrets for us And are ready to show them at once. All around is native and sweet And all people are happy to meet. Stay alive forever my hometown And let us to be always proud!

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My hometown

Where can I find the place
To feel happy with a smiling face ( or To feel happy, calm, without chase)
To smell flavour all around
And never hold emotions down.
Mykolaiv is my native land
With acacias’ blossom and the width of grassland.
Its like a river that is always fast,
It’s a source of energy that will never be past.
All the roads are leading me here
And it’s a dream of every sightseer.
And the sun is the brightest here,
And the birds sing louder here!
My Mykolaiv, my hometown,
You are washed by two rivers
They are like playing fountains
That making the waves’ mountains.
Mykolaiv is a shipbuilding city
And here people are really witty. < nice line!
This city is full of bright colours
Which u can see during warm summers. (you)
Mykolaiv is the city of brides        (interesting!)
You can find them easily without any guides.  (very interesting!)
Mykolaiv is the city of wheat fields
And we are proud of power that our city wields.
Picturesque meadows and uninhabited steppe
Are better to see urself but not in the web.  (yourself)
Mykolaiv is beautiful one
And u can have here a lot of fun.  
The best zoo in Ukraine is also here
And be sure that it can endear.
Theatres, monuments and museums
Will give you a lot of new ideas.
Every street, every park, every square
Is a treasure house that we need to spare.
All of them can tell us their story
And open some bright moments of glory.
Admiralska Street is one of the best
It’s like a museum where u can rest.
There buildings are older and newer
And Drama Theatre is waiting its viewer.
Soborna Street is the main in the town
And the Central Boulevard is the widest one.
Nikolska Street is crowded with students
And they have a lot of amusements.
Every part of my town,
Every street, every tree, all around
Keep all secrets for us
And are ready to show them at once.
All around is native and sweet
And all people are happy to meet.
Stay alive forever my hometown
And let us to be always proud!

 

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