Birthday present
My girlfriend's birthday was coming up (? wound be coming) . I intended to buy a jade bracelet for her birthday present. As I was unfamiliar with jade bracelets, so I would be prepare to go to buy with my friend of mine, who is an experienced connoisseur of jade bracelets . He could help me trying to bargain for saving my money.
I had heard so much about an flea market selling jade bracelets. In the fea market that there were many jade bracelets being sold. I had often heard tell of the place, in which there was many gorgeous jade bracelets.
On Sunday afternoon, we came here and sauntered through the market for about an hour and a half . We stoped under a huge tree to have a rest. After a time, I noticed a tall spare man sat on the grass with some beautiful jade bracelets at the other side of the market.
I at once got up from the old trunk and running towards that side. My friend, Xu Dalian soon cought me up . I cought sight at of a very beautiful jade bracelets on the grass in front of the man . I fell to its charm like an easy prey. I thought it certainly becames my girlfriend. the jeweler (who) looking like to be highly experienced began to introduced it to me with enthusiasm, but I didn't quite catch on to his meaning for I was unfamiliar with jade. " How much will it cost? " I asked. "Only 200 dollars ! " he replied. So my friend began to dicker with him for the jade bracelet.
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Birthday present
I had heard a lot about a flea market in which there was many types of gorgeous jade bracelets
On a Sunday afternoon, we came there and sauntered around the market for about an hour and a half . after that , We stoped and sit under a huge tree to have a rest. After a while sitting there, I noticed a tall man sitting on the grass with some beautiful jade bracelets at the other side of the market.
I at once got up and run towards that side. My friend, Xu Dalian soon followed me. a very beautiful jade bracelets caught my eyes . I thought it would definitely look beautiful on my girlfriend. the jeweler (who) looking very experienced began to introduce it to me with enthusiasm, but what he said did not make much sense to me since I was unfamiliar with jade. So, i just ask him quickly" How much does it cost? "Only 200 dollars ! " he replied. Then my friend began dickering with him for a more reasonable price and i ended up buying it.
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