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Complying Dreams When I was a child, I had dreams like all children, but unlike to other children, I wanted to be rich and I wanted a motorbike, but I knew that anybody will give it to me, so I would have to work hard. I dreamed with a motorbike because I loved it and I really wanted it. When I was 14 years old, I began to work in a restaurant on weekends and I had in my mind that with that work I would obtain my motorbike, but sadly, I was wrong because my salary was insignificant, so, after, when I finished my studies in the school I worked all days at the restaurant to obtain more money. Approximately, I worked for 5 months until to complete the money to my motorbike, so, now, I had money to buy my motorbike, and what do you think? Of course! I bought my first motorbike, it was color blue, it was brand Yamaha RX 115, this motorbike for me means happiness, liberty, love, passion, entertainment, and much more, because I felt that my motorbike was like a perfect girlfriend because it doesn’t put problems, it doesn’t discuss, so, for me it was perfect, I think that in my life it had been the better moment for me, and actually, I think that my motorbike is fantastic, although I have another motorbike, always I will think that the motorbikes are excellent and it is more than a simple vehicle. Finally, now, I want a big motorbike to travel around my country and maybe around the world, but, the important point is that I have a motorbike, I kept my first dream, now I’m struggling to comply my second dream, I will be rich.

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Accomplishing My Dreams

When I was a child, I had dreams as all any children have. but However, unlike to other children, (It is a little confusing. Try to explain differently) I wanted to be rich and I wanted a motorbike,.I knew that anybody nobody will would give it to me, so I would have to work hard. I dreamed with a this motorbike because I loved it and I really wanted it.

When I was 14 years old, I began to  working in a restaurant on weekends and I had in my mind that with that working there I would obtain afford the motorbike, but sadly, I was wrong because my salary was insignificant. So, after Afterwards, when I finished my studies in the school I worked all days ( Do you mean that you started working fulltime or every day?) at the restaurant to obtain more money. I worked approximately 5 months until complete the money being able to save enough money to buy the motorbike.

Finally, I had enough money to buy the motorbike. What do you think was the first thing I did? Of course! I bought my first motorbike. It was a blue Yamaha RX 115.  This motorbike for me meant happiness, liberty, love, passion, entertainment, and much more. I felt that my motorbike was like a perfect girlfriend because it doesn’t put problems (Put problems where? Try to say this same sentence in another way. Maybe: “I felt that my motorbike would be my girlfriend because it was simpler than a woman.” Or something like that!), it doesn’t discuss like one. so, for me it was perfect, I think that in my life it had been the better moment for me I think that it was the best moment of my life.

I think that my motorbike is fantastic, although I have another motorbike, always I will think that the motorbikes are excellent and it is more than a simple vehicle. Finally, now, I want a big motorbike to travel around my country and maybe around the world, but, the important point is that I have a motorbike, I kept my first dream, now I’m struggling to comply accomplish my second dream, I will be rich.

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Complying Fulfilling the Dreams

When I was a child, I had dreams like all children did, but unlike to other children, I wanted to be rich and I wanted a motorbike, but I knew that anybody nobody will would give it to me, so I would  should have to worked hard. I dreamed with of a motorbike because I loved it and I really wanted it. When I was 14 years old, I began to work in a restaurant on weekends and I had in my mind that with that work I would obtain get my motorbike, but sadly, I was wrong because my salary was insignificant, low so, after, when I finished my studies in the school I worked all days at the restaurant to obtain earn more money. Approximately, I have been workeding for 5 months until I have complete saved the money to for my motorbike, so, now, I had money to buy my motorbike, and what do you think? Of course! I bought my first motorbike, it was blue, and of brand Yamaha RX 115, this motorbike for me meanst happiness, liberty, love, passion, entertainment, and much more, because I felt that my motorbike was like a perfect girlfriend because it doesn’t didn't create put problems, it doesn’t didn't argue discuss, so, for me it was perfect. I think that in my life it had been was the better best  moment for me, and actually, I think that my motorbike is fantastic, although I have another motorbike, always I will always think that the motorbikes are excellent and it is are more than a simple vehicle. Finally, now, I want a big motorbike to travel around my country and maybe around the world, but, the important point is that I have a motorbike, I kept fulfilled my first dream, now I’m struggling to comply fulfill my second dream, I will be rich. become rich.

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