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First notebook It's my first time wrote here. I'm writing on the way to hiking at Nagatoro. Nagatoro is famous spot to see cherry blossoms. This area has been selected as one of the famous for cherry blossoms in Japan. web is following: http://www.nagatoro.gr.jp/en/sights/index.html#a01 I go to there with my colleagues included in president (called shacho in Japanese). I love to hike in fall and spring. Because it's possible to watch autumn foliage in fall and cherry blossoms in spring. I'll upload pics later:)

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First notebook

It's my first time wrote writing here.
I'm writing on the way to hiking at Nagatoro.
Nagatoro is a famous spot to see cherry blossoms.
This area has been selected as one of the famous areas for cherry blossoms in Japan.

web is following:
http://www.nagatoro.gr.jp/en/sights/index.html#a01

I go to there with my colleagues includeding  in the president (called shacho in Japanese).
I love to hiking in fall and spring. Because it's possible to watch autumn foliage in fall and cherry blossoms in spring.

I'll upload pics later:)
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Hi, some minor corrections.

One thing, I've assumed you meant the word Shachou, so have put in CEO - (http://www.lingo2word.com/lingodetail.php?WrdID=375017)

I've also removed the additional spacing and reference to the web-URL. The URL refers to the previous topic, so there is no need to add a comment that you are adding a URL, instead just include the URL in brackets after the topic of importance.


First notebook

It's my first time wrote writing here.
I'm writing on the way to a hike hiking at Nagatoro.
Nagatoro is famous spot to see cherry blossoms, and  this area has been selected as one of the famous for cherry blossoms in Japan. web is following:  (http://www.nagatoro.gr.jp/en/sights/index.html#a01 )

I go to there with my colleagues included including in the CEO president (called shachou in Japanese).
I love to hike in the fall and spring, Because it's possible to watch autumn foliage in the fall and cherry blossoms in spring.

I'll upload pics later:)

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