Invitation to Japan, Where You can See Cherry-Blossom in Full Bloom Right Now
**Would someone kindly correct my writing, and preferably in better phrases.**
Have you ever thought of visiting Japan? If you have, which season do you think of? If it is difficult for you to visit Japan frequently, I recommend you to come to Japan in spring. You can see rows of cherry-blossom trees everywhere. Yes, even in cities. You cannot ignore them because the world is pink at that time. If you take a picture casually by a river or in a park, three-quarters of it will be in pink. They make people happy to walk by. Moreover, it is a start of new life for many people. School starts in April, so parents take pictures with their children by the trees for a good memory. Their faces are shining with full of hope for the new life. School graduates start their first work wearing a creaseless new business suit. When I see them, I make up my mind to set a new goal for the new fiscal year. Cherry-blossoms invigorate those who are a little tired of too-busy life. Come and watch cherry-blossoms and surrounding people with smile. It will make you happy as well.
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Invitation to Japan, Where You can See Cherry-Blossom in Full Bloom Right Now
**Would someone kindly correct my writing, and preferably in better phrases.**Have you ever considered visiting Japan? If you have, which season do you think of? If it is difficult for you to visit Japan frequently, I recommend that you to come to Japan in spring. You can see rows of cherry-blossom trees everywhere. Yes, even in cities. You cannot ignore them because the world is pink at that time. If you take a picture casually by a river or in a park, three-quarters of it will be in pink. They make people happy to walk by. Moreover, it is a start of a new life for many people. School starts in April, so parents take pictures with their children by the trees for a good memory. Their faces are shining with hope for the new life. School graduates start their first work wearing new creaseless business suits. When I see them, I make up my mind to set a new goal for the new fiscal year. Cherry-blossoms invigorate those who are a little tired of the too-busy life. Come and watch cherry-blossoms and surrounding people with a smile. It will make you happy as well.
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