My memory about communicating with a foreigner.
I would like to talk about the first time I used English as a tool for communication. I have studied English for many years, but I always regard it as a compulsory subject in school curriculum, seldom do I talk with others in English. When I was in junior three, I talked with an American which changed my opinion about English. That was the day I went to visit my sister, and surprised to find there was a amazing girl with blue eyes and blonde hair in my sister's house. Her name is June, and she was homestaying in my sister's family. She said "nice to meet you" to me, and I automatically responded "nice to meet you, too." coz it's the dialogue on my textbook. But in our following conversation, I felt a spasm of awkward. I couldn't express myself fluently and precisely. God, I never chatted with a real native before! It's hard for me to adapt to her accent in the first place, which was quite different from the radio type recording in the English exercise books. Second, I worked myself hard to recall what I had learnt about the language and it's quite a time for me to organise sentences with right vocabularies and grammar. And what's worse, I forgot the prononciations of several words I knew. June found my embarrassment and she smiled friendly to me. I felt her encouragement and I tried to speak confidently although with my poor spoken English. I cannot remember what we talked about, but I clearly remember how I felt about this experience. I always got high grades in English tests before. I never realized my level of English speaking coz it's not examined. I always adored people who can fluently chat with foreigners, but I never took a step to make myself become that kind of people. I started ro recognize that the essence of English is a kind of language, used by people to communicate. This experience really imposes a profound impact on me.
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My memory about communicating with a foreigner.
I would like to talk about the first time I used English as a tool for communication. I have studied English for many years, but I always regard it as a compulsory subject on the school curriculum and seldom do I talk with others in English. When I was in junior three, I talked with an American who changed my opinion about English. That was the day I went to visit my sister, and was surprised to find an amazing girl with blue eyes and blonde hair there in my sister's house. Her name was June, and she was homestaying with my sister's family. She said "nice to meet you" to me, and I automatically responded "nice to meet you, too." because it's the dialogue on my textbook. But in our following conversation, I felt a spasm of awkwardness. I couldn't express myself fluently and precisely. God, I never chatted with a real native before! It was hard for me to adapt to her accent in the first place, which was quite different from the radio type recordings in the English exercise books. Second, I worked myself hard to recall what I had learnt about the language and took quite a time for me to organise sentences with the right vocabularies and grammar. And what's worse, I forgot the pronunciations of several words I knew. June saw my embarrassment and she smiled friendly to me. I felt her encouragement and I tried to speak confidently although with my poor English. I cannot remember what we talked about, but I clearly remember how I felt about this experience. I always got high grades in English tests before. I never knew my level of English speaking because it's not examined. I always adored people who could fluently chat with foreigners, but I never took a step towards that, myself. I started to recognize that the essence of English is a kind of language, used to communicate. This experience really imposed a profound impact on me.Very well written, but please use the past tense in all verbs as the story is set in the past. Bringing in the present tense just confuses the reader.
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My memory about communicating with a foreigner.
I would like to talk about the first time that I used English as a tool for communication. I have studied English for many years, but I have always regarded it as a compulsory subject in school curriculum and I talk seldom with others in English. When I was in junior three, I talked with an American which changed my opinion about English. That was the day that I went to visit my sister and I was surprised to see an amazing girl with blue eyes and blonde hair in my sister's house. Her name was June, and she was homestaying in my sister's family(what does "homestaying'' mean?). She said "nice to meet you" to me, and I automatically responded "nice to meet you, too." since it was in a dialogue on my textbook. But in our following conversations, I felt a spasm of awkward. I couldn't even express myself fluently and precisely. God! I never chatted with a real native before! I said to myself. It was hard for me to adapt myself with her accent in that point with was my first real conversation with a native English speaker and was quite different from the audio files of English books such audio files of story books of Oxford book warm story book's series. Secondly, I worked with myself hard to recall what I had learnt about the English language and it was quite a time for me to organise sentences with right vocabularies and grammar. And worse thing was that, I forgot the pronunciations of several words I knew. June found my embarrassment and she smiled friendly to me. I felt her encouragement and I tried to speak confidently although with my poor spoken English (you don't need give this additional information here as you have mentioned it in text repeatedly).I cannot remember what we talked about, but I clearly remember how I felt about this experience. I always got high grades in English tests before. Before this Experience happened I was never aware of my weakness in English speaking since I never had a real conversation with a nave person. I always adored people who could fluently chat with foreigners, but I never struggled to become such those peaple. I started ro recognize that the essence of English is a kind of language, used by people to communicate (this phrase is wrong and if was correct; it was not needed to be mentioned). This experience really shocked me to understand this importance that : how could it be : speaking with a native English speaker.0
That's a typical sorry ! I can understand what you were feeling at that moment. I was in that situation,too. I used to get into a mess with my poor vocabularies and bad pronunciation when speaking English with a native. However nervous you were, you will gradually overcome 'cause you have had a chance to use English in everyday conversation, which you rarely do in school. Just keep on practicing and getting better day by day :))
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Please help me make this notebook more natural in spoken English.
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