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My first day here
It's my first topic and I hope it won't be so* awful as I have supposed.Well, today is my first day on italki and at the same time it's my first day at school after the holiday.
It was a better day than I had thought before going to gymnasium (yes, I'm studying at a school specialising in the liberal arts). Today we had the following subjects: social science, geometry, chemistry, FE, English, history and extra Maths. My favorite subject is history because I'm really fascinated in learning about historical figures and past times. Can anyone imagine what a vast past we have? (yes, apparently there are 24 dead people to every one living today, ie. dead:alive = 24:1). There were a lot of mistakes and right decisions, failures and victories, happiness and sadness... Just imagine it.
Well, I have a lot stories to tell you but know I have to learn some new words, take a shower and go to bed.
I wish you good luck, my dear colleagues
*one can also write ... won't be as awful as..
My first day here
It's my first topic and I hope it won't be as awful as I have supposed.
Well, today is my first day on italki and at the same time it's my first day at school after vacations.
It was a better day than I had thought before going to gymnasium (yes, I'm studying liberal arts in a special school). Today we had the following subjects: social science, geometry, chemestry, FE, English, history and extra Maths. My favorite subject is History because I'm really fascinated by learning about historical personalities and past processes. Can anyone imagine what a vast past we had? There are a lot of mistakes and right decisions, failures and victories, happiness and sadness... Just imagine it.
Well, I have a lot of stories to tell you but I know that I have to learn some new words, take a shower and go to bed.
I wish you good luck, my dear colleagues
My first day here
It is my first topic and I hope it would not be Too awful as I have supposed.Well, today is my first day in italki and at the same time it's my first day at school after the holiday.
It was the better day as I had thought before going to gymnasium(this phrase does not make any sense. please review and rephrase it). (yes, I'm studying at special school based on liberal arts). Today we had the following subjects : social science, geometry, chemistry, FE, English, history and extra Maths. My favorite subject is History because I am really fascinated in learning historical personalities and past processes. Can anyone imagine what a vast past we have? There are a lot of mistakes and right decisions, failures and victories, happiness and sadness... Just imagine it!
Well, I have a lot of stories to tell you, but I have to mention this that I have to learn some new words; take a shower and go to bed.
I wish you good luck, my dear colleagues
If we suppose that we are writing a formal text, then we should regard some things that we should not do them, as : using short form of words and in some cases even phrasal verbs such if you know in IELTS exam we are not supposed to use phrasal verbs. And as you see there are delicate tricks let call them, that we should observe.
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