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Teenagers and parents Being a teenager is a very difficult part of everybody´s life. I remember when I was a tennager, it was very difficult to me because I thought that nobody understood me but my friends. I got embarrassed very often, because I was very shy. I think when you are a teenager you feel embarrassed for many silly things. Moreover, I spent most of my time in my room listening to music and I didn´t talk too much with my parents. However, being a teenager have many advantages as well, you don´t have to worry about money because you don´t have big responsibilities, only study and keep your room cleaned. Regarding the relationships, there are a lot of struggles between teens and parents. Often, parents today do not have enough time because they have to work all day long and they can´t play, talk or spend time with their children. The way I see it, it´s a very difficult period because teenagers want to try new things like sex, smoking, drinking and drugs. Their friends are very important for them even it´s the first time they are fall in love and if their friends or they girlfriend have bad habits like smoking, drinking alcohol or taking drugs for example they will probably want to do the same. Therefore, I strongly believe that parents should talk with their children as much as they can in order to protect them and avoid conflicts and bad habits for their children. In conclusion, I think for parents the only way to protect their children is to take responsibility of their learning and their lifestyle. Parents should be aware not only of the problems involved but also of the role to be played in protecting their children.

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Teenagers and parents

Being a teenager is a very difficult part of everybody's life. I remember when I was a teenager, it was very difficult to for me because I thought that nobody understood me but my friends. I got embarrassed very often, because I was very shy. I think when you are a teenager you feel embarrassed for about many silly things. Moreover, I spent most of my time in my room listening to music and I didn't talk too much with my parents. However, being a teenager has many advantages as well, you don't have to worry about money because you don't have big responsibilities, only to study and keep your room cleaned.

Regarding (better: As for) the relationships, there are a lot of struggles between teens and parents. Often, parents today do not have enough time because they have to work all day long and they can't play, talk or spend time with their children.

The way I see it, it's a very difficult period because teenagers want to try new things like sex, smoking, drinking and drugs. Their friends are very important for them even and it's usually the first time they are fall in love. If their friends, boyfriends, or their girlfriends have bad habits like smoking, drinking alcohol or taking drugs for example they will probably want to do the same. Therefore, I strongly believe that parents should talk with their children as much as they can in order to protect them and avoid conflicts and bad habits for their children.

In conclusion, I think for parents the only way for parents to protect their children is to take responsibility of for their learning and their lifestyle. Parents should be aware not only of the problems involved, but also of the role to be played in protecting their children.

 

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Outstanding writing, my corrections are very minor.

- You can type an English apostrophe ( ' ) on a Spanish keyboard, it is the key to the right of the 0 (zero). It is not the same character as a Spanish tilde ( ´ ).

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