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The meaning of marriage We live in an age full of historical selfishness. In the name of free will and self-assertion, the man is increasingly convinced to be master and judge of himself, so that, having misinterpreted the concept of freedom, often shy away from any emotional connection, especially if it is based on mutual respect, loyalty, love, considered a free gift of his own feeling, pure and sublime. Young people are increasingly oriented to avoid any assumption of responsibility, and extend far beyond the canonical limits of entertainment and their adolescent occupations, rejecting the responsibilities of adulthood, among which, until a few decades ago, there was even getting married and bringing children into the world. But my question is: What is the difference between marriage and cohabitation ?. Is it really necessary to have a ring on the finger and the cards with the signatures to be happy?

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The meaning of marriage

We live in an age full of historical selfishness. In the name of free will and self-assertion, the man is increasingly convinced to be the (because it sounds better) master and judge of himself, so that, having misinterpreted the concept of freedom, often shy away from any emotional connection, especially if it is based on mutual respect, loyalty, love, considered a free gift >>what do you mean by "free gift"? of his own feelings, pure and sublime. Young people are increasingly oriented to avoid any assumption of responsibility, and extend far beyond the canonical limits of entertainment and their adolescent occupations, rejecting the responsibilities of adulthood, among which, until a few decades ago, there was they were even getting married and bringing children into the world.
But my question is: What is the difference between marriage and cohabitation ?. Is it really necessary to have a ring on the finger and the cards with the signatures to be happy? 

"The" is specific. You're not specifying who's wearing the ring and whose writing cards with signatures, so you don't use it. You're talking about people in general and "the" is too specific to do this. 

Also what do you mean by "cards with signatures"? I had no idea what you meant by it...

Anyways, overall it was very well written. 

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