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Internet shopping These days,more and more people heve been using computers and the Internet. With spredind of them, it is getting easier to use Internet shopping. There are many shops which use Internet as the way to sell too. Besides web sites which arrange these shops have appeared. Many of you use Internet shopping. However Internet shopping has not only advantages but also disadvantages. I explain some advantages and disadvantages about Internet shopping. At first, I discuss advantages of Internet shopping. The most important and definite advantage is that Internet shopping makes it easy to find what we want. If you go ordinary shopping, we have to visit many shops looking foritems we want. But through the Internet, you don't need to move, and can get items in your house. In addition, without going to foreign countries, you are able to get items which are sold in only the country. Internet shopping goes over the border of countries. Secondly, concerning disadvantages, sometimes what you purchased through the Internet is different from what you really want. It is difficult to distinguish correctly the size or color of items in the computer display. Even though the size or color are shown in the web page. For example about me, I have purchased shoes using Internet shopping, yet the size was too liitle to wear them. Though I chose the white one, what I get was rather grey than white. I had to send them to the shop I purchased from, furthermore I need to pay expense to re-send them. I discuss above-mentioned advantages and disadvantage of Internet shopping, it is most significant for who use Internet shopping to find and purchase items carefully. If you pay attention to what you are going to purchase, we would be able to get what you want.

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Internet Shopping

Nowadays more and more people use computers and the Internet. With their spread it is getting easier to use Internet shopping. There are many shops which also use the Internet to sell. Also websites for these shops have appeared. Many of you use Internet shopping. However Internet shopping has not only advantages but also disadvantages. I will now explain some advantages and disadvantages about Internet shopping.
First I discuss their advantages. The most important and definite advantage is that Internet shopping makes it easy to find what we want. If you go ordinary shopping, you have to visit many shops looking for items you want. But through the Internet, you don't need to move, and can get items to your house. In addition, without going to foreign countries, you are able to get items which are normally sold just in a particular country. Internet shopping goes over the border of countries.
Secondly, concerning disadvantages, sometimes what you purchased through the Internet is different from what you really wanted. It is difficult to distinguish correctly the size or color of items on the computer display, even though the size or color are shown in the webpage. For example, about me, I have purchased shoes using Internet shopping, yet their size was too small* to wear them. Though I chose the white ones, what I got was rather grey than white. I had to send them to the shop I purchased from, furthermore I needed to pay to re-send them.
I discussed the above-mentioned advantages and disadvantage of Internet shopping. It is most significant for those who use Internet shopping to find and purchase their items carefully. If you pay attention to what you are going to purchase, you will be able to get what you want.

*Traditionally 'small' and 'large' refer to clothes' sizes. 'Little' is not wrong and would certainly be understood, though.

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