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Advertisements Nowadays, there are miles of thousands advertisements on TV which encourage people to purchase anything. Many people criticize it, however the truth is that the advertisements can be useful too because it let people know about any product that they could need. In this essay, I will discuss some arguments for and against advertisement. There are a lot of researches which show effects of advertisement on people. While we could think that we are not being influenced by the advertisement, on the contrary, the truth is that we are not aware of the effects. In general, the professionals of publicity use a lot of techniques in order to present their product as if it was unique, and in this form people feel special when they buy the products. However, will it be the solution ban all the advertisements? As all in life, everything has their good points and bad points, and we have to find out! On the one hand, Whether advertising cigarettes can be terrible for the health because you are promotion a drug, on the other hand advertising medicines can be very good for the knowledge of people. As far as I am concerned, of course I reckon that we will have to ban all the advertisements which promotion a drug and things like that, but for me, the solution is not eliminate the publicity, if not, controlling what type of product is being advertised and if this, it is good or bad for the society in general.

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Advertisements

Nowadays, there are miles of thousands of advertisements on TV which encourage people to purchase anything. Many people criticize it, however the truth is that the advertisements can be useful too because they let people know about any products that they could (better: might) need. In this essay, I will discuss some arguments for and against advertisements (or: ads, or: advertising).

There are is a lot of researches which shows effects of advertising on people. While we could might think that we are not being influenced by the advertisements, on the contrary, the truth is that we are not aware of the effects. In general, the professionals of publicity (better: marketing) use a lot of techniques in order to present their product as if it was (better grammar: were [subjunctive]) unique, and in this form way, people feel special when they buy these products.

However, will it be is the solution to ban all the advertisements? As all in of life, everything has their its good points and bad points, and we have to find out what they are! On the one hand For example, whether advertising cigarettes can be terrible for the health because you are promoting a drug, on the other hand or if advertising medicines can be very good for the knowledge of people.

As far as I am concerned, of course I reckon that we will have to ban all the advertisements which promote a drug and things like that, but for me, the solution is not to eliminate the publicity (better: marketing), if not, controlling what type of product is being advertised and if this, it is good or bad for the society in general.

 

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