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Greece flagnikol kavali
Gym and healthy diet! Hello, i am here again. The purpose of this essay is a conversation which i got in morning.I try to be fit because i like it very much and i feel comfortable!! Some people believe that this situation is repressive, i believe the exact opposite. I will give you some examples: When you wake up in morning and you feel light,at the same time your acquire good mood! You can drink a cup of fresh juice and boiled eggs and a toast with turkey and cheese! This breakfast is complete and you will certainly fill up!!For lunch, you can crate anything but with limit(i.e. you don't need 10 slices of bread ). You should't eat only when you are hungry because so you eat more! Ok, i said lots of words i should get to the point! You eat free, but not junk food no refreshments, no many sweets(of course we need some sugar) and lots of bread. It is very important to work out every day. You can visit a gym and to watch some fitness programs and choose your favorite. You don' impress your self!You will love it!When you see your body you fell excellent, and it seems except if you are satisfactory with your body(the things are better at this situation). I vote exercising and healthy diet with limit! Do you agree?

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Gym and healthy diet!

Hello, I am here again. The purpose of this essay is a conversation, that I had in the morning.I always try to be fit because I like it very much and I feel comfortable being healthy!! Some people believe that this situation is repressive, I believe the exact opposite. I will give you some examples: When you wake up in the morning and you feel light,at the same time your acquire good mood! You can drink a cup of fresh juice and boiled eggs and a toast with turkey and cheese! This breakfast is complete and you will certainly fill up!!For lunch, you can crate anything but with limit(i.e. you don't need 10 slices of bread ). You should't eat only when you are hungry because you probably will eat more! Ok, I said lots of words I should get to the point! You eat free, but not junk food no refreshments, no many sweets(of course we need some sugar) and lots of bread. It is very important to work out every day. You can visit a gym and to watch some fitness programs and choose your favorite. You don't impress your self!You will love it!When you see your body you fell excellent, and it seems except if you are satisfactory with your body(the things are better at this situation). I vote exercising and healthy diet with limit! Do you agree?
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Always use capital letter fot "I". I hope it does have helped
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As well, i would like to suggest me some synonym words about common words(i.e. believe,take,do). Thanks!
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Please, i wait your corrections and your opinion!

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