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Little sketch I remember that I met her for the first time at Thomas's birthday party at his father's house. When I came into the party was in a full swing. People were dancing , drinking and chilling out near the large pool with a pale blue illumination. I think it was quite strange that I didn't catch sight of her as soon as I'd come by the door, because she...um...stood out. She was sitting on a folding-chair, at a very edge of it, and looking at the water wistfully. The pool's light was leaving the flickering reflections on her sharply detailed face, making her looks even more beautiful and otherwordly as she were. The space around her was special too. It seemed like the sounds of - too loud and hard - as I thought - music and the noise of party crashed right at the invisible border surrounding her elegant figure and because of that she were sitting there with a such quite and peaceful face.

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Little sketch

I remember that when I met her for the first time at Thomas's birthday party at his father's house. When I came into arrived, the party was in a full swing. People were dancing , drinking and chilling out near the large pool with a pale blue illumination. I think thought it was quite strange that I didn't catch sight of her as soon as I'd come by the door, because she...um...stood out. She was sitting on a folding-chair, at a very edge of it, and looking at the water wistfully. The pool's light was leaving the flickering reflections on her sharply detailed face, making her looks appear even more beautiful and otherworldly as she were . The space around her was special too. It seemed like the sounds of loud music and the noise of party crashed right at against the invisible border surrounding her elegant figure. and because of that In addition, she were  was sitting there with a such quite and peaceful face.

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