AUV summary!
Storms and accidents of trade have caused millions of shipwrecks at sea but
these shipwrecks provide excellent information about culture
trade routes of old civilizations//,the large majority of shipwrecks are very
deep and divers can not swim so deep.
Besides the use of manned submarines is too expensive,
but this changes for a mini submarin :
the automatic underwater vehicle (AUV) that is inexpensive, small and very good.
Now a team will use a AUV to explore an area of sea north Egypt,
where it was believed that an important commercial port there was about 4000 years ago.
if it doesnt has coherence, please, correct me. (coherence,puntuation and grammar)
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AUV summary!
Storms and accidents on trade routes have caused millions of shipwrecks at sea , but they provide us excellent information about cultural trade routes from former civilizations.The large majority of shipwrecks are on deep high oceans and divers can only swim to certain depths. Besides, the use of tripulated submarines expeditions are too expensive, except for a mini submarine: the automatic underwater vehicle (AUV).
The AUV is inexpensive, small and efficient. Now, a team will use an AUV to explore an area of sea north Egypt, where it was believed that an important commercial port that existed about 4000 years ago is located.
if it doesnt have coherence, please correct me. (coherence,puntuation and grammar)
I have made some changes and rewording in order for it to be coherent. Let me know if you have any questions and I will gladly help you. :)
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