Hokkaido snow festival
I went to Ice festival in Toyako,Hokkaido
and saw Ice sculptures.
They are made of water of lake produced by a volcanic eruption.
It was different from Sapporo snow festival.
We enjoyed fantastic scenery very much.
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Hokkaido snow festival
I went to an ice festival in Toyako,Hokkaidoand saw ice sculptures.
They are made of
It was different from the Sapporo snow festival.
We enjoyed the fantastic scenery very much.
Hi, you do not need to capitalize ice. It is not a proper known.
I added the word an before ice festival in line one. (I am not a professional language teacher, just a native speaker of English, so I can't explain why it has to be there. But just know it does. )
"Water of lake" would be said as "lake water"
And you have to put in the word "the" in the last two sentences.
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