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My favourite Sport I can´t remember how many times I have left a sport because I don’t like it or because it was very hard to improve for example Golf. Some years ago I began to play Golf but I left because my improving was very slowly. Now, some years later I think that I have found my favourite sport, Longboard. The longboard is like Skate but with a little differences that makes it a fantastic but dangerous sport. The first difference are the wheels, the Skate´s wheels are more rigid and smaller. However the Longboard´s wheels are bigger and the hardness depends on the slope you want to put down. The second difference is the board as you have gathered. The skate have a small board with big tails, which encourage to do the tricks. But the longboards have a bigger board with no tails because normally the Longboarders don´t do tricks when they are going at 80 kilometres per hour. In my opinion this are the biggest differences between Skate and Longboard. Of course, there are a lot more but I can´t write all in a little essay. I hope that one day I can be like the people I see in Youtube.

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My favourite Sport

I can´t remember how many times I have left a sport because I don’t like it or because it was very hard to improve for example Golf. Some years ago I began to play Golf but I left because my improving was very slowly.
Now, some years later I think that I have found my favourite sport, Longboard.
The longboard is like Skate but with a little differences that makes it a fantastic but dangerous sport. The first difference are the wheels, the Skate´s wheels are more rigid and smaller. However the Longboard´s wheels are bigger and the hardness depends on the slope you want to put down.
The second difference is the board as you have gathered. The skate have a small board with big tails, which encourage to do the tricks. But the longboards have a bigger board with no tails because normally the Longboarders don´t do tricks when they are going at 80 kilometres per hour.
In my opinion this are the biggest differences between Skate and Longboard. Of course, there are a lot more but I can´t write all in a little essay. I hope that one day I can be like the people I see in Youtube.

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